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Teddy_Ejendens

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  • Teddy_Ejendens
    Teddy_Ejendens5 months ago
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    on harry and hermione*

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    Teddy_Ejendens5 months ago
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    The story gets too boring when it shifts its pov's on and Hermione. You should focus more on the powerhouses because they're way more interesting. Perhaps a Grindelwald interaction or another adventure through different magical communities. This story is at its peak during the mc's adventures outside, especially one concerning the ancient wizards. Cliodna is also an interesting character. You should include her more like making arcs concerning her and her background(the druids). Making her the ship to the mc is also an interesting idea, but I think it's better if there is no romance.

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    Teddy_Ejendensa year ago
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    With the anime showing how powerful squad 0 is, i think it's a pretty good time to update this story.