DMIV

I have also just read the first few chapters yet but I can see a lot of potential in your story. I'm not the biggest fantasy fan however I think that many people, who like fantasy, would enjoy this novel as the setting and the plot are very intriguing. Just like the others already pointed out, there are a few grammar errors but all in all I didn't see it as a big problem. Aside from that, I like your writing style:) I will continue reading this so keep it up author!