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Typo?: on a wimp -> on a whim * (wimp refers to someone with a cowardly and/or weak character) * (whim refers to a sudden or fanciful idea; an impulsive thought)

A pretty style

A confusing sentence 👀🤔 * “opened her eyes at pace”? I think you mean for the word “pace” to refer to speed? So perhaps it’s more accurate to use English vernacular such as “she quickly opened her eyes” or “her eyes flew open”. * “seated on the ground at her ass weight”.. ? Yeah I have no clue what this means 😅

Typo: dairly -> dairy

We all have our currency 🤷🏼‍♀️😂

Oh noes! A cursed cliffhanger 😬😭

almond-shaped hair -> almond shaped eyes

Mu Yixue is happy that Mu Yixue left?

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola