Imaginative13

This recent four chapters feels horribly forced, it went really bad pacing wise, there was slight build-up at first then suddenly it skipped the Middle part and went straight to the finale.... although the writing is good. Thanks for the chapter anyways.

hmm, 🤔 wasn't she the original cause of all the destruction of the world, in the Original wasn't she the wife of the first Dragon god who went berserk after she was killed by Histogami, after that the first dragon god destroyed the five face of the six and died at the end because hitogami stabbed him in the back when he was exhausted and alredy heavily injured. Then i wonder 🤨 what the author will do about the origin of the world and the current events that happened, although i could guess that....like it's gonna be. when Hitogami killed her originally she was transported to the future instead of dying and now is seeking revenge from him and something like that.

It's night 😪 here, it seems you're at the other side of globe.

It was bearable for the first few chapters but suddenly it went downhill. it's really bad, like those Chinese novels. The characters and Narration feels like gen-z chatting with code words and dialogues are written as if they are Machine. I don't feel any emotions from either character or the narration itself which is the key for a good engagement story. Neither of them are good, Although the original manga had a lack of romance,but Deku was still likeable except for his low confidence. But here he is horrible. 100 plus chapters and no development at all, neither personality nor story wise, 😞 wonder what's the point of this fanfiction 🤔, although fanfiction are mostly wish fulfillment or different variations of the same story. This one doesn't make's sense at all, plus the MC don't have a goal even now. This might sound harsh judgement, but having invested my time, it's justified and I am stopping here, I cannot read too much AI written story they all sound the same.

cringe fest 😖😖, and tons of chat gpt.

I guess i am the first to comment. Thanks for the chapter.

It's getting really annoying.......How he is forcing the story.....Hey author did you run out of ideas or what?........the way he is behaving and his attitude and also Hepaestus even if it's AU.....for god's sake..she is a goddess and she can tell if someone lies so what's the point of this whole drama......the story is stuck for the past fifteen something chapter....even for a slice of life it's too much ranting to handle....I hope it will take a turn for better in the future chapter....and hopefully the author/MC would learn how not to treat an adult like a child....Cute my ass... Thanks for the chapter anyway.

Thanks for the chapter. 😊..But it was quite annoying for him to play angry love birds with half/half in the last section... 😔

Hey, Author.......why the hell are you rushing so much. Everything feels so clustered that it's hard to read and digest them. In one chapter the MC is Kinda dumb normal human and in next he is mind fucking the gods.....and how? No explanation what's over. Although the writing style aims for a mature and professional style, skipping the basics just ruins the story......I know you have your own vision, you want to develop the story the way you want it to be, and you should do it......But Please slow down a bit and explain things clearly.....like what kind of power is that, what kind of language is that.....and why the fuck without a reason he can fly in the sky and is unrecognisable in a sketchy clothes. criptic language doesn't always help, sometimes a simplified explanation will elevate the story more......your story lacks vividness to let the readers imagine the scenes you are painting with words.....it's hard to make the picture of something you don't have clarity of. I hope you read this and may this be helpful.

Though this has a potential of becoming a pretty good fan fic if the author played the cards right but unfortunately, it got annoying after 30 chapters. Even though he already has a pre established excellent story and a huge information from fandoms and wiki, he is not using it at all, and he is trying making Hestia overly dumb, though she is a bit airhead still she is one of the most powerful goddess, she doesn't show it because she don't like flaunting her powers. And can you stop trying to fill the chapters with info dumb, every chapter after 30 th has half them containing useless information dumb. I know it my personal opinion as a webnovel reader having read hundreds of novels and fanfic, you have the potential you don't need to rush just one time read your own story, you find out yourself your weakness. thanks for the Fanfic