Brady_Lustlara

Why the hell are you abiding by Luffy rules. Just because that dipshit doesn't kill doesn't mean your MC has to be a pansy and let the ppl who destroyed his land and exploited his citizens to live.

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Bruh. This shouldn't even be a chapter. This shit is like 100 words.

Dude why is the MC so dumb? He has a system that literally copies skills so instead of stupidly trying to learn navigation quickly why doesn't he yoink the skill from the fossil and then use him for review.

Is this guy a transmigrator or just some rando in westeros who has some memories of some other place because this guy is just straight up retarded with his decision making. Just sleeping with hoes and starting a underground organization which is glossed over. The there is the system. The system is honestly a letdown with how wonky it is in giving stat points because according to the daily workout he should get 36 stat points a year and 324 in nine years so for him to be just stronger than Jaime Lannister is a letdown.

So instead of just dropping by and yoinking Daenerys from the fatty he's going super far up north to visit the loosest whore in the North. This guy is just plain stupid.

Is nobody else wondering how she knew his name? Dude didn't introduce himself to her but she somehow knows his name.

The story is just weird. The MC is trying to be unique in taking over sound village which is honestly stupid because it literally has no powerful people or things. The female lead is just some random mob chick who simps after the MC which is a waste because of all the potential real characters in the shinobi world. just an all around letdown of a fic because of the ma's hairbrained schemes somehow working even with bad acting on his part.

A bit of a letdown. The MC is what superman is to humans in that he's way stronger than everyone and is a simp for one chick. The guy keeps harping about being a thirty year old but blushes when kissed. The dude must have been a 30 year old virgin in his previous life if a peck on the lips leaves him embarrassed and frozen.

Finally. I was honestly waiting for something to happen with Selena because if nothing happened then she shouldn't have been written in.