Zjay_Ennui
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"Reading is my habit, Writing is my Passion"
2023-08-06 加入Global
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Zjay_Ennui7 months ago發表I understand that it has been rewritten so many times, but it's just becoming clearer and clearer than before.Nice advancement
- Zjay_Ennuia year ago發表
Yeah, some of them need some fixing,like your grammar,some of your sentences, but it's alright if it's your first time and it's had a nice plot though