RemoteRomance

How on earth do you manage to make such a pathetic character, and a saiyan no less? Since all of the other reviews refuse to actually put in the work, let me explain the plot in a few very easy steps. -Guy gets reincarnated with broly’s powers -Guy is weaker then a baby monkey up until he grows up -Guy gets big mad when wolf pigs attack village but doesnt become legendary super saiyan despite the fact that his parent nearly dies -Darksides forces come to planet -He waddles up to the giant warship and knocks on a door -Manages to be tricked into thinking that the people in spikey black armor are part of a galactic federation (that doesnt exist in dragonball) -Manages to get drugged -Monkey people get captured -He wakes up and is big mad -He ignores darkside, a character he KNOWS can destroy planets to help monkeys slowly -Author makes Guy horny for a second -Guy gets beaten up by people Yamcha could solo -Mother Monkey CHARGES THE GUY THAT SHE KNOWS IS THE BOSS OF THE PEOPLE THAT EFFORTLESSLY BEAT HER -Mother Monkey dies -Guy with the powers of one of the strongest people in fiction gets damaged by furies and lets darkside get away There is something called believability that you need to keep for your readers to continue to care about whats happening and the closest this author comes to that is making a character so infuriating that it lets you ignore it for a few seconds. All and all -MC is not a saiyan, much less a legendary one -MC is completely braindead

This is absolute bullshit, darksides tech is so insanely different then anything in dragonball that the fact he would mistake it for dragonball tech is infuriating.

Thats bullshit.

Feels AI generated at times. The MC gets stronger or weaker depending on the situation and does insanely stupid stuff to further the plot or make thing intense.

This author is making me hate literally everyone in this fic.

So not only are these bots near useless But it also looks like the author is going to nerf him so he gets beaten up by dogs. :/

The plot is chaotic and nonsensical. The writing quality is good though.