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Just wanted to write that you’re doing an amazing job in you amalgamation of the universe’s while also fleshing out some of the characters more to blend better in your narrative, the only thing I have of note would be back in the beginning when you gave Samael glimpses of the ‘real’ world that have yet to be addressed. But I have a feeling you’ll do say later on in fascinating way and I look forward to it!

Then why bother other than to nuke him which in my opinion could’ve happened as soon as him came to beyond Voldy’s level in his weakened state?

What happened to his aura and psychic abilities?

I agree it’s wild and it’s for no reason or after he was the one who was slighted he saves Hermione and put in hospice but gets vilified for something that wasn’t so serious and with the professor now she watches him get isolated by all of his peers and is surprised when he is not close to and doesn’t trust her not making much sense but he’s certainly not making it better for himself.

My first thought reading this is when Zinnia gets or fights with Rayquaza the MC pulls up with a Shiny one like ‘Mine is Better’

His existence in the Pokémon world is enough to change things let alone with the harem addiction to the system that is gonna get him entwined with several notable females which will in turn influence the time line. I’m down with him worrying small scale but if he could not have it be a crippling problem or a reoccurring issue that be great. But with the way you ended the chapter I think that’s how you intend to do it just wanted to get some insight.

Usually I’m down for an edgy MC however he’s too in his head granted I have only read to chapter 6. But it’s like every other paragraph is him going on and on about how he is scared of everything and it is harder to survive in the world due to it being real life. But after he does that for every single thing he does it is legitimately aggravating when you are genuinely interested in seeing how he will eventually develop not constantly going on and on and not doing anything about it. Especially when it’s alluding that he was an adult, so he needs to grow up. He may have changed later in the story and I do not intend to put down the work itself because I am sure it is a solid piece with great potential, it unfortunately for me did not get to that point soon enough.

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