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In my opinion Raven is not only a good friend but also a really smart ally to Hino. She is someone who knows a lot of things and have much knowledge which helps the mc a lot. And the way she gives information to the mc is done so gracefully, without giving a lot of hint. She also has a great chemistry with the male mc, which make her more likeable. I also like the fact that she always do things in a calm and rational matter.
The chapter was great, it was nice to see those inner thoughts inside the mc's mind, it kinda reminds me of myself lol. I think the conflict that the mc is facing right now is really a good character development. The mc also realized that even he's smart and perfect the world is still unfair. It's also a good touch that you used the phrase "all is fair in love and war" as the title, it really fits the current situation. The characters in this series is really well written and i think it's gonna be even better as the story progress.
It was a nice touch that you use the words "obsession" as the title of the chapter it really shows how obsessive he is now and it's a great way to describe his. And her obsession will only give more obstacle for the mc to tackle. Which is good for the mc to test his wits more and overcome all those obstacles. BUT HE FAILED SCIENCE CLASS
i can imagine both of them they are cute aswell!
dude! your wife looks fragile! dude how dare you!
your crossing the line dude! but it make sense
dude! how dare you treat her like that! she look fragile!
Girl, what you both did is just something else, it's light and the vibe is good. i love how you both make love without us seeing it. GODAMIT!
EYYY! HE DESERVE THAT!