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Have you ever thought of making extra stories or side stories in your novel like this one? There are quite a few times where we spend long amounts of time in Xavier’s pov that we don’t know much abt what goes on between leon and the others like with the Princess scene at the beginning of the birthday part. Idk if it would work but it might allow you to make extra or what if parts of the story without going against the flow or just writing smt that has been on the mind but you didn’t have a way to fit it in the actual story

She was pretty pure before an she did take it there before her pussy

Kinda want it to be that Leon stops them from doing anything after getting out of sight from Xavier to sorta make her doubt him. Maybe Leon knows abt his and scarlet’s proposal 🤔

There are a few early on but this is the revenge side and the author hasn’t been updating the corruption side for long and is taking their time I guess. It really sucks to me just cause it’s basically everything I thought of, mc getting new girls to replace the others, the goddess is going to be fcked in front of Leon in the future, og girls will most likely be left by mc and leave leon bcs the goddess will probably have Leon’s d get smaller, etc. It’s all so cookie cutter that it’s boring

This is the most obvious revenge arc ever

Author likes ntr so much he cucked his own novel. Honestly the story was great up until the time I’m writing this at around 300 chapters. The scenes were great and I like the story, however the author basically had burnout and what I can only assume writers block. Author basically just asked what readers wanted and is now playing catch up to rewrite a revenge ending. The story now feels rushed and scenes go by fast or are mostly skipped and detailed parts feel thrown in. I have no doubt that the author had a plan for the original ending which is why parts like Carla’s scene and Leon’s backstory feel similar is quality to earlier parts but that they lost their drive and forgot most of what they were planning up until now. I hope that this doesn’t just become the author shoehorning in a bunch of women to replace the old characters but the direction seems to almost point that way with the newest introduction. Hope the author can at least deliver a satisfactory conclusion to this work or just drop it cause I don’t even want this to be just some half baked revenge story after everything that has happened in literally the whole entire book

Feel like the quality of this is going down, the scenes feel like they’re going to fast and are just there to fill in space or to “appease” the ntr people and are not as detailed as before. Honestly I think you should’ve just dropped it if the original idea has already been scraped as it’s lost it’s flavor and is now just trying to fill in Xavier’s harem with new girls. Everything feels like it’s just rushing to the end so that it could get the revenge peoples approval, completely turning over the original story

Author said there is still going to be Ntr in this so Leon might still fuck his sister or aria etc

Xavier winning in the end is such a cop out. If he does become happy in the end I hope it’s only with Carla for the slight bit of revenge but I don’t even want Leon to be angry abt it. It’s fine if both of them come out with their own satisfaction at least

When was this said, the author only asked if people wanted revenge or corruption