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Not A Masterpiece, but a solid story, in my opinion. Hikigaya in this story is a bit extreme compared in terms of negativity to the original, but still Hikigaya. 青春猪头比企谷的实力至上教室果然有问题
2 things you might consider to change in your story There = Their Emmidiently = Immediately
it's beyond stupid anymore, it's your story though so I don't have the right to complain
it is
I read a lot of cote fanfics, and I can tell that they have a common thing, that is replacing Ayanokouji's action and moment, this is a great fanfic but it would be better if L doing something new, rather than doing what Ayanokouji should do like the originial, because if it continues like this, then there is no difference between reading original COTE novel but the Mc's name changed to L
Sorry, I just fixed it
check the synopsis, I've already added the chinese title, just search it on google
there is no mtlfanfiction for this novel