Genesis13

I watch s1 ep 15 again when I feel lost. felt that comment, bud.

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honestly, that's an ingenious idea. i could've never thought of that. but dear reader, brace urself. things r going to be wilder than just ability snatching. u will enjoy the struggles of these 2 dudes which I am gonna present 🎁.

I could drag on the debate and so on. it's js pointless. and arguing with someone is useless who steals smth but denies it saying that it's from a site. how stupid would it be if i used an official art of a fiction for my novel and use it to generate revenue? it's unethical. ppl like that aren't worth arguing against. I hope that clears u doubts.

alright

sir! aye aye sir! shall follow u till the depths of hell sir! lolol felt like role-playing. the scenes were detailed enough NGL. u r a man of culture

honest review here. the idea is good, the characters are good, the world development is good, the system is good, the power balance is good. but the writing style isn't. it really ISN'T. I wouldn't call it poor or bad, but rather it's more of a choice. theres'stoo much info dump with too little dialogue between the Paras which is a rookie mistake and it kills the reader base. trust me, you would've at least 1.5x the time of curent reader base if not for this problem. now going deeper into the problem of writing style, u might be thinking that doing an explanation or info dump was really necessary and it was crucial at that particular point but trust me, u using 1st person narrative to make it sound like a narrative didn't work. 1st person narrative's power is shown best when u do a narration in present tense (more like the 'i powered up and kicked the dragon's ass'.) anyways, there are ways u can let the ppl know abt the world without doing boring character dumps. just refer to some popular guides since they tell you the 'how' and not just 'what'. and yeah the para rule too. too many lines in a single para. it's not suitable for readers on webnovel. it kills their interest and already short attention span so keep that in mind. that's all from my side. if u think i am going out of my way and talking shit abt ur story, don't mind my words. just keep doing what u do best. anyways thanks for the free chaps. cya around.

defying the numbers. wish exams would be like that.