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The story was about the Author going into their novel. The transportation, not the regular isekai, hey, you got me there! It is easy to follow the story. For Grammar, I don't remember seeing any mistakes ;however, some wording usages in moments felt a bit strange, nothing off-putting but its probably a personal peeve. The Style is a good style but it could be spiced up with more flavor for the action scenes. The Characters are done well, though I have a small problem with a few of them. Some of the dialogue for the characters have some strange contexts when they speak which may lead to some confusion. Also, while there is For the World itself, it is done well. You get a clear understanding of the character's and how the system functions as well as the World elements at play. It's well done in that part. Overall: I think this a pretty good Novel, although it has some elements that can be refined, the story still stands out.

Here we have our braniac mc in a rebirth story which has a nice flavor to it with him changing and deciding to do things differently this time around. I like the interaction between characters. The style of writing made the story entertaining.

The story was about the season of winter. It has a good set up for the chapters. It is unclear to me if the character in the first chapter is the main or the thing that appeared in chapter 2 is so I am a little confused. For Grammar, there are only a few mistakes with spelling and periods so a proofreading may do you some good. Some word choices should also be re-arranged as it does lose me sometimes in the sentences but I pick up quickly. The Style is not bad. It is a good style to write with, although you may want to work on refining it as mentioned for clarity sake. The Characters, Well, there's only two so far. They seem like poets if im being honest, though this is two chapters. I am not exactly sure where the plot is going with the characters we have right now so I can't even say too much about them . There is not really any characters interacting in the chapters; however, you could say that chapter 2 has some slight interactions through that memory thing. For the World background, well, it's a winter season from what I can gather and it seems to be the theme here. There is a great job done in making us see the things that are going on there and the scenery. Overall: I think this is something that has room for improvement to maintain a story but it is not a bad one. With some refinement to the Grammar and style, it can be a fabulous tale.

It is a good story. I read it and I found myself fascinated by the wordplay that went on int he story. Strong characters are presented to us. The only thing I would say is a small little thing is some small grammar issues but it didn't detract from the plot. The comedy is also entertaining, very well done!

Oh I definitely like this wordplay.

This was a good read book. The character is powerful for their age but the premise is what's interesting and got me hooked in. There are some great characters among the cast of them and some funny moments. Overall, the author cooks up chapters nicely.

Well, this story is a fresh one so I can't really have too much opinion with only two chapters but I will say it is a good set-up, although as far as I can see not much has happened yet. Mc gets dragged into the world with the others of class and gain stats. The Mc may be a little too smart in my opinion. It does not come off believable to me. Sure, he aced science and all that as explained (Which could have probably been made into some dialogue to introduce some classmates beforehand even if just to get a brief understanding of their personality or even a hint. Just a suggestion!), but can he really just be transported, immediately figure out the world and then say it is the same? Also, if he is to learn about the system, it should be something he becomes able to understand rather than saying he 'knows' what he does not know. I believe that can be refined. Also building something before knowing anything seems....kind of strange to me. I understand that you want your MC to be a genius with a God complex but this not that credible. The concept and the story you write can be great, but you will have to make the right set-up and make it so that it can be more understandable in the character's motivation(if any) and goals. Currently, I cannot get a read of if this character yet and the plot has been introduced, only that he plans to deceive other people because he gained some unique skills. Sorry but this also had to be mentioned: I was introduced to alot of stats . It may be because i'm not stat heavy person but I found it to be unecessary (Unless of course these people are important roles to this story, but even then it should be slightly more condensed). I know nothing about the characters behind the stats at all. That's just my one issue there. The World itself has yet to grow since they were just transported and are in this room gaining the run-down of events. Not much has happened yet as mentioned. Now most of what I said can be alleviated with more chapters coming out in a stable rate but as it stands now, there is not alot that I know to say about the story right now. When more chapters do come out, my opinion may change but currently, more character is needed for me to understand the MC's behavior.

This is a story that I read and I believe that it has potential. The story, characters and world is good, and I will give it full marks, but there are a few grammatical errors you should go over. I really like the story premise though and the plot. great job.