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Why should Catherine be separated from him? She's a dungeon inhabitant brought by him, logically, she shouldn't stay too far from him. Now you're making it like she's an inhabitant or citizen of that foreign world
Weren't the beastmen given only one continent? How did they expand and occupy "other" continents under the humans' nose
Is there no Magnus among this board of directors? They keep talking bad about the number one family
How? After clearing 200 levels?
There's no need to over complicate your life. Both systems are way too similar, just stick to what you have, and rather dream of a more diverse class
I love his moves so far, but he should try calming down a bit and consolidate his force. He's kind of moving too fast, leaving holes in certain areas. Every time soldiers die, he replaces them from the population, and yet his soldiers seem to be insufficient to fill up the necessary areas, like defence of some cities, also one should know that the three great commanders should now have at least 10,000soldiers under them, yet only Adam has such numbers.
No contract to seal the deal? If there's even one in the first place cuz you guys didn't even agree on how long they/she is going to work here. If she decides to quit anything soon and go face other parts of her life, there's nothing stopping here. Should have made here your subject 🤷🏾♂️
What's this again? Bro, she's not to only mage in the world, and it's not as if you need a mage so badly that you're trying to personally convince your enemy to submit to you. I don't why authors do this; it's not as if that character is the only girl or person with that power, especially if you can easily find one of you decide to look
I just hope nothing romantic happens between them. Readers already see them as enemies, so am guessing she'd be killed or enslaved after crafting the teleportation channel. She's not the only mage in the world, no need to force her into your force, or under your rule
I like this guy. Only thing remaining is to see how author intends to craft his relationship with Mira and the other girl (Personally, I prefer the blonde as I think Mira is more trope-aligned). Mostly because I think 90% of Web author always portray an unrealistic pattern in forging romantic relationships or interests.