MMan1175

The power scale is really ambiguous. There’s a set power scale, they even emphasize how it’s been established and recognized for a long time but nothing seems to follow it. Just have the characters have a higher level. The mc tries to always stay positive even in terrible situations and it starts out endearing but snowballs into annoying pretty fast.

The weak to strong is kind of misleading. The mc is only weak for a few chapters and then is grossly OP. The humor is refreshing and pretty good. The mc and company are kind of active, which I like, but circumstances keep changing making them feel more passive but even when passive they keep getting more advantages handed to them.

Retcon changes, especially when it’s this early in a novel is a sign of poor planning.

The mc is inconsistent. Sometimes he’s patient and methodical but sometimes he’s extremely reckless. The author can’t seem to make up his mind. It’s like the mc is bipolar but since he’s the mc whatever he does he’s right. Some of the behavior switches are detailed and we see why he’s switching but the author abandons that and eventually just says he’s going to switch because it’s what he should do. The originally interesting personality becomes more and more wooden as we’re told the mc changes but the author fails to mention why/how. A strong opening abandoned for faster mc development.

Not good but not bad. I wouldn’t pay for it but others might. The translation is a little off but not terrible. The system is inconsistent. The mc is kind of reckless and flat. Everyone else is more or less irrelevant.

Well doesn’t some one need to get to them to request them to come? Wouldn’t that naturally double any travel time?

So it increased by a factor of five before but only doubled this time? If it was reversed it would make sense as he went from lower third to middle third but this is just poor planning by the author and doesn’t bode well for the story as a whole.

This is just a mess. The translation quality is awful. The mc is an arrogant narcissist that tries to be funny but just makes remarks that make you cringe.

Ok I’m done. The whole finding rare cultivation techniques on the enemy can be played every so often but it every time is just poor writing.

Ah the defense talent. Honestly forgot about that part.