Dolphin_Clan

Was really interesting enough i was willing tp use my limited passes but then would get error for trying to use them. so i gave up. Saw it was free today so i was like why not. now i wish i didnt. IT MAKES ZERO SENSE AFTER 160. They added a new ploy that i was ok with but then it just devolved from there. It's like the author just threw ideas out and never tired to make sure they made sense in the novel world. They started talking about the dungeon save and him goin to class that was at the start like it was the first time & now they're talkin about grandma being with them when it was never said she was goin we're thrust into another battle alongside her. Take your coins & passes elsewere!

wtf is up this this mix of jumping that makes zero sense come on now! it's like your just threw battles in the air and hoped they worked but they do not

I'm so confused with this story now keeps jumping back to that event back in the early chapters

what happened to this book I'm just getting error codes?

you havent read up to chapters in the 400's yet im guessing. when you reach there about 10-15 chapters arent about the book you are currently reading but whole other book which is called book stuffing or fluff.

where the next 16 chaps arent even from the novel? new one for me

few spelling errors names being messed up but very fluffy romance to read

pretty good so far one off the few that has locked chapters

what a interesting turn of events so far

early beginnings but i can't wait for the downfall of Dave