Just having fun, nothing sus here.
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very understandable. Sorry that it ruined your experience. I hope that you might like to try it out again in the future as that's what I did most of the time when the same things happened to me. Glad to have you as a reader and thanks for checking my story out. ( ◜‿◝ )♡
Killing and Conspiracy are a common thing in high society. Attempted Theft, murder attempt in Elena's book, they were low tier crime. In this world of magic, many more evil things could be done for example "using newborn babies for sacrifice", "cutting off a lady's nipples and eating them as cherries and then regrowing them back with healing magic to do the same again" or "Mind controlling someone to kill their own family with their own hand and then giving the person control to his body back". Elena had experienced all of those. So in her eyes, the things done by the Ion family were really minor as no one was actually hurt.
if someone attacks her, Elena's gonna retaliate no matter what. As for someone she doesn't consider a scum, she is not going to go out of the way to kill. As I said before, she could ignore politics but most of the common people could not. So Elena also needed to be careful about them.
Elena can ignore politics without any problem but a lot of common people would be affected by that. That's not something Elena wants.
hmm, I think I have always emphasized that Elena was not really using her godlike powers for anything in this world as that makes everything too easy. Still she was going to make sure that everyone stays safe. I have tried to give the readers the sense that this is a little flaw that Elena had. After surviving in a World on the forefront of destruction, the definition of struggle had changed for him. What these people went through was not considered to be too dangerous by Elena. Sorry that you did not enjoy this part and thanks for all the support. ( ◜‿◝ )♡
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thanks for pointing it out. I mistakenly used the name of characters from a different book of mine. Sorry about that. ( ・ั﹏・ั)
I don't remember the MC having a system. As for concepts, the general world building was pre-planned other than that obviously I will right as it came to my mind as I'm writing it daily. As for the perspective change I have no idea what you are talking about. The whole novel only has a single perspective and that's mine, I mean third person's perspective. As for the scenario change, I do mention that with "...". Other than this valid criticism. Thanks for checking the book out. ( ◜‿◝ )♡
okay, I just did. As I do not have an editor, some typos and grammatical mistakes easily evade my eyes. I'm sorry about that. Hope now it's fine. ( ◜‿◝ )♡
Thanks and I do intend to continue and end the book.