Deathstorm_100

To the author after I was just looking for a DD fiction and yours piqued my interest, I have to say it is great but why make Grandmaster organize training method for him when he has old bing that doesn't make any sense since he has been training and practicing alone. All along your fiction as been great

All mighty author we cradle at your feet your creation as been great all along

it's been an excellent story all along every part of the story seems right there to me.

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As a btth fan i would love if you use Mc as Xiao Yan

It been interesting all along,i don't have much to say,just a work well done KUDOS to the Author u're doing great so far.

It has been an interesting story all along and am really enjoying it. It good that the story pace is slow, to put it all the author is really good, i might not be a writer but this is actually awesome🖒🖒🖒🖒.💯

The story is interesting i just started reading it and am still at chapter 23 firstly i didn't want to read it before because i felt that i might not find it interesting but it was all a lie the fact that the sorcerer supreme made a suit for Spiderman is interesting great work author and i won't forget ur power stone🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

It has been an interesting story all along and a big kudos to the Author u're doing great but it got to a point u made mistakes with the spellings and i think you are to excited that why u made those mistakes and i sympathize with u for all what u have pass through,make sure u complete the remaining part [img=update][img=update][img=update]

the story is interesting but the writer needs to correct some mistakes like spellings,but i will like the writer to continue the story to the writer you really tried i love your books,good job.