SaurianMp4

Well…

Wow that ending was….something, I was expecting a “10 years later” and Arkhan uniting with Mordred or something but to leave it like that is a bit disappointing but nonetheless I enjoyed the story for what it is.

I agree with you! And no worries I do plan on adding some Heroes in the mix for future content.

Thank you! It’s looking like it will be longer than 5 chapters cause even I’m enjoying writing this. I think like most, Granolah and his arc wasn’t well received, so I’m hoping to change just a bit to make it more enjoyable.

Tbh I was thinking of keeping Cooler around since I do want Granolah to have his own “Villain-like rival” I’m trying to keep Granolah on the anti hero type level, but yeah keeping the others in check can make them strive to get stronger which in turn will make Granolah stronger as well.

I’m glad you’re enjoying the story so far, and I’ll definitely try to take some of those ideas into account. As I do plan on incorporating movie stuff, Turles is definitely in the story, and I do wish to keep Raditz alive as well.

As of right now, no, but I want maybe 2 or 3 love interests.

No I’m sure he was like 5 or so, I’ll go back to reread that, they don’t really specify his age but he’s in his 40s currently when his arc happens. If he was a child I don’t think it’ll change much.

Funnily enough he’s very similar to Siegfried, composed and reserved (my favorite type of character tbh), but you can probably add in some witty stuff to spice things up.

I read all the chapters in one sitting, loved every bit of it. Keep up the good work!