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yeah but when making a fanfic like this you can't just add on random elements to buff jjk that don't make sense for the type of frame you're working with which is lotm power system my main gripe Is how long it takes the MC with advancing to the next sequence especially when he as an idea of the acting method okay cause it took a side character with nothing but the knowledge of the acting method in lotm less than 12 months to reach sequence 6 of a potion so why did it take the mc of these fanfic 4 years to advance bro a dog was able to reach sequence 7 faster than the mc in 10 months for the dog to become sequence 7 with the acting method why his MC taking so long I Just want to know why it's taking so long for him to move to the next sequence even if the mc is lazy in 4 years he should have been a sequence 7 by now at least it feels forced that it,s taking so long for him to advance so you can purposely keep him weak and unable to one shot jjk verse.
Peak
nah did other Jason,s brook end up in Jason's old world and is now going to get what she wants from her og brother
damn you ever going to consider making a epilogue chapter
A fellow Lord of the mysteries fan
A fell
he might be on some of that strong shit
bro should know that if he actually goes for it he will end up regretting it down the line cause as they say don't bite the hand that feeds you she gave you,your first weapon, plus a small chance she is actually awake and planning to leave you impaled like a kabab if you actually go for it
no does beyonders don't have the acting method and need to get ingredients which the mc of this doesn't need ingredients and knows the basics of the acting method so why does it take him 4 years to become sequence 8 this is clearly the author forcibly slowing down MC's progress in acting so the mc doesn't one rap everyone by the time cannon starts