helsia

the amount of detail within each paragraph is astounding, you can tell how much effort the author put into describing the characters and the world around them. the dialogue also flows smoothly and naturally, allowing the reader to easily imagine a conversation between two characters in their head. this story is incredibly promising and also takes certain tropes and plays around them, which is always interesting to see. the writing in general is almost flawless, as everything is coherent and makes sense without having to reread anything.

very interesting premise, the characters seem to feel realistic and well-written, and you can get a sense of where the story is going whilst at the same time leaving you with questions. there are some grammatical errors here and there, along with some tense inconsistencies, but it's still legible and doesn't take away much from the overall experience while reading.

vindyr's queen...?

what an intelligent looking young man!

"a new me."

a survivor.

"helsyn."