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JeacklyWoy

JeacklyWoy

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2023-04-07 加入Global
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  • JeacklyWoy
    JeacklyWoy2 years ago
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    The character of Cheng Li seems interesting, but there isn't much insight into his personality or background yet. It would be great to see more depth to his character as the story progresses.

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    JeacklyWoy2 years ago
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    The premise of the story sounds interesting, with a mix of fantasy and vengeance. However, the writing style in the summary feels a bit choppy and could benefit from smoother transitions between ideas. It would be helpful to provide more details about the characters and their motivations to make the story more engaging. Consider incorporating more descriptive language and fleshing out the characters to make them more relatable to readers. Also, consider revising the dialogue to make it flow better and sound more natural.

  • JeacklyWoy
    JeacklyWoy2 years ago
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    The story of Akira Sajuri, now Godfrey, provides an intriguing look at the struggles of commoners in a world where wealth and nobility reign supreme.

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    JeacklyWoy2 years ago
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    Cruise from Hell" is a captivating story that explores the complexities of relationships and the power of self-discovery. The character development is fantastic, and I enjoyed watching Fiona evolve throughout the novel.

  • JeacklyWoy
    JeacklyWoy2 years ago
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    ZueSea" is a powerful and thought-provoking novel that teaches us the importance of cherishing love and seizing second chances. The characters are well-developed, and the story kept me engaged from start to finish.