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I think that the kuranai thing is a bit weird and that he should be a little more daring to get power but overall it is a good fanfic. The only thing that is bad is that there isn’t many chapter rn
I have seen fanfics like this where the mc is just worrying about the uchiha massacre and is the only story development that goes on and most don’t even finish cuz they just like to drag out the story cuz they know there will be no conflict after this and the story goes to shit and you also need to update more
Below where?
It was very good but I was reluctant because it would have been better if you told us what his technique was In the summary
The Mc could reverse summon himself
It is a good fix but it around 200 the system disappears and it doesn’t show up anymore as far as I have read
You need to fix the then names for things it makes it completely impossible to read and this probably could have been a good story if not for this