_Mad_Scientist_
Every little girl dreams of being a princess, of castles in the clouds and magical kingdoms beyond the horizon. And sometimes, just sometimes, dreams do come true. With destiny calling her name.
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_Mad_Scientist_2 years ago回復 QW_JiHi該書已被刪除。- _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago發表
This story has me hooked, like I couldn’t stop reading the moment I started it. The betrayal is real and I felt it through my soul. I recomand reading this story !
- _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago發表
EXCUSE ME.... WHAT??!
- _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago發表
The story is great with lots of potential, the story gets better and better which is logical since the writer improves every chapter. the start of the story feels kind of robotic but I truly trust the writer and their potential.
- _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago發表
I would have put a comma between “fine” and the rest of that sentence, it reads so much easier.
- _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago回復 Rebecca_Kabigi_1647
Thank you on your feedback, I will definitely remember it and give the next chapters a heading like you suggested. I appreciate the time you took to read, comment and review this story!
該書已被刪除。 - _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago發表
The story is great, I would suggest rewriting the first (few) chapter(s) but the writing definitely gets better the more chapters you read. The story is interesting and I hope the writer keeps their motivation up as I wish to read more of this story!
- _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago發表
This story is truly amazing, from the very first line. I'll be waiting for other chapters to come out. To the autor; keep up the good work!
- _Mad_Scientist_2 years ago發表
This story really has me sitting at the edge of my chair, It's an intresting story to say the least. The writing is amazing and really pulls you in like your dreaming instead of reading.
