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Hmm pretty interesting can't say much but it's pretty good so far. It is worth reading with good potential( if the author doesn't disappear in the middle )
i will continue soon
i will continue
Isn't Grammarly an AI language program? but well about the mc it is hard to explain his past life but there will be a whole arc about it ... I remember it was chapter 88 to 93
no, it is not, and even if the author forgets some small details … he must remember and be careful in introducing new characters + the mc is kind-hearted simp .. from the ever beginning despite how he suffered in the past life which must make him more mature but nooo he get kidnapped in the first ever moment he leave his parents ... that is one of many points i can mention like wtf man you just completely destroy and crush your original mothers life but you completely forget about her and start treating another women as your mother that is a sign of hypocrisy for me
actually i already wrote everything to chapter 110 so cant change it sorry ... but tian phai power wont disappoint you
thank you for the nice review
nope it is not
done ... better now ?
yes but not all of the names in the novel Chinese