Red_Hood69

honestly this story would have lots of twist, and suspense and mystery. i hope you enjoy that thanks for reading

I'm glad someone understands the concept of this story. Unlike some who can't comprehend a bit of suspense or have patient

yes. I plan to make her a goddess too, she's a real person too, and one of the goddess(I really shouldn't be revealing this. but it doesn't even matter anymore😔) She's the goddess of emotions and empathy. shhh don't tell anyone😉

Please don't comment if your brain can't comprehend a plot. If you can't handle twists in plot or MC then drop it

Its part of the story, i only apologized because he's first side was to dumb, but that was supposed to be the thrill and shocker of the story(To leave the readers asking why he switched all of a sudden, to make the story more intriguing) afterall didn't you see suspense and mystery as part of the tags. So if you can't be patient enough then the story is not for you. You can't expect me to be revealing parts of the story in the comment section or to not make the suspense more interesting. Are you even paying attention to the story. You never asked questions like why is another henry in a cell. Or why is jane important. At the beginning xavier showed jane respect, does that mean they are on the same level(i was going to release janes true identity in chapter 33) and finally the people of the world are incredibly strong, henry can't come close to them yet And as for the dark dawn agents, didn't i say xavier's mana cells was depleted, are you paying attention at all? did i say the agents were strong? This is sci fi also, i'm incorporating the part that begs questions and leave readers wondering so don't think i don't plan my story. I promise it would all be explained, did you even wonder what drained his cells. And i already mentioned that xavier wasn't that good with weapons, he only learnt the sword for convenience. Do you know what it means to be a swordsmaster? And henry used the dash skill to win that duel. I also made mention of him losing for 5 days, can't he learn in 5 days. Please read the details of the stories before commenting. This is also a sci fi story. Everything must be explained well

He just loves the thrill of battle and gets excited when its time to kill remember i said he has two sides

he's not he's not even strong yet the dark dawn agents were just weak

Thanks for the review

was the fight scene okay? i need honest opinions

thanks, i always tend to confuse it