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I don't normally hand out 1 star reviews, especially when I've only read 2 chapters here but I'm going critism route this time (pity 3 stars). The story feels like it has zero flow and is way too fast paced with these skips. The introduction itself was more weird than funny like author tried to make it out to be, system girl casually can manipulate reality/probability (making a van slip on a banana peel?), 10th birthday, "oh yeah I can use magic now btw" and proceeds to make advanced mind shield. The India stuff is already starting like author's previous work, sure it's not "THE GREAT INDIA NATION" type of stuff like how Chinese novels do it, but it does get very weird when MC just decides "I'll have an Indian dad" and the wand he gets later is specifically one made in India. It just doesn't feel quite right to read, authors previous work had the same problem.
Bleach reference?
I've caught up with stacked chapters
Waiting for the "COI ending not cannon" replies.