AZI_Khan

Sorry with any misspellings. I used voice input. I'm way too lazy to type everything

Also, Nephis and him, I would very much like to see how you do that. Because it sounds like you're making the female love interest her, right? Well, interesting choice. One that, personally, I don't think works. Because it seems like Sunny has a, you know, better synergy with her. Oh, yeah, actually. If you decide not to pair up your OC with Nephis speed up the romance between Nessus and Sunny. Because, well, it's painful to watch thousands of chapters without them getting together. And it was a real good thing recent chapters paired together now. Because, you know, they just fit well together. But that's only my personal bias speaking. Another interesting change could be, well, fate changing. Because he's involved. Like, if you plan to not put Sunny and Nephis together, but instead put Nephis and your OC together, we could change fate a bit by dropping Cassie with Sunny. Dropping a relationship between them, you know. Romance between them instead. Signifying that this is not going to go like the original story. And fate recognizes there's one more player now. Albeit somebody you can easily influence without a problem. After all, no way in hell your OC is going to not suffer when he knows so much about the plot. Because, trust me, fate has shown how much of a. Sadist it is with Sunny. And I feel like the sadism will only increase, especially with Sunny. But your OC will also get gut-punched once or twice, I feel like. Anyway, interesting, interesting. Sorry if any of this sounds a bit too pushy.

I'm getting more and more interested

So I don't see him Getting with nephis or Cassie, really too much of a personality difference Also, his mind set to be kinda a problem Honestly , that could be a way to balance him out of bit more And. Sunny still has fated, so how would fate treat sunny with you're OC? Around? What that mean? He gets even more. Got punched by fated because while I would love for sunny to suffer because he hasn't in the recent chapters But also does that mean more growth? for him The more I'm thinking about it. That's a lot of potential storylines here. Branching off from the original That could balance out your oc. In. Shadow slave or just make the world stronger.

Interesting but remember to balance him Don't want him to become overpowered Especially because well, the top-level of power seems to be what sunny and nephis can achieve for a divine aspect user so at maximum at their level Sorry if I sound like a bad reviewer , I just don't Want another fan fic turning into a overpowered power trip harem

they can't recharge their only shadow clones

huh????

Yep, just remember nobody can survive the dream realm alone

you good bro

you good bro