WoodClosetMemories

Wow this was an insanely good short horror story. Writing Quality: Very good! I was surprised at how good it was. Stability of Updates: It's only one chapter, but as far as I can tell, it is only supposed to be one chapter. Story Development: The story develops quickly, but in such a way that it feels suspenseful. Character Design: The descriptive details are very good. Not much to say here. World Background: Not much to say about this either, the world background isn't necessarily important in this story. Overall, an amazing short horror story that you should read.

I lost so many braincells reading this, but in a good way! I can't even explain why this is about, so I'll just get into the review. Writing Quality: A few typos but to be honest, it doesn't break my immersion due to this being a satire comedy anyway. Stability of Updates: It updates very quickly, so that's a plus. I don't see how I can complain in this department. Story Development: This story has some of the best worldbuilding, and fight sequences I have read, and I say that with 100% sincerity. Character Design: This novel doesn't really get into to the designs of the characters, and sometimes the few designs that are described throw me off. For example. Jakub Inuku is a character the MC fights, and for some reason he has tendrils. I can't really judge it though, after all it is supposed to be random. World Background: As I said earlier, absolutely amazing. The world in general is a multiverse? but the new cities and world the characters go to are always interesting. Overall, a very good story. I don't usually put thought into my reviews, but I had a good time reading this, such a good time in fact, that the few negative things I noticed are overshadowed by the good. An easy 5/5.

The grammar is the real thing that makes me dislike this, and the fact it hasn't updated. I still think it's decent for what it is, but I can't in good conscience rate it high since it only has one chapter.

This is one of my favorite light novels (and manga) of all time. I know some people may not like the OP protagonist trope, but this one is so over-the-top that it is refreshing in a way.