Bing_Shan

Our society still needs morality.Its pretty much lacking not in society but also in the world. We might have abundance of moral stories and morals but still we lack of absolute morality.

The beginning is enticing.Now its a challenge how the story gradually develops.This is a critical part full of uncertainities and curiosity as beginnings are often this much challenging. The grammar and spellings are also good and on a level that anyone with eng basics can understand. The development of an engaging storyline is the real challenge for the writer. It should keep the readers engage as long as it lives. The life of a writind g is determined by both reader and writer(they have equal role in the success of a story and these two factors are in correlation with each other).[img=recommend]