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Aw, darn. Sounds rough but we all learn stuff all the time. I'm sure it is dissapointing to realize a story isn't one you want to continue after two dhundred some chapters.[img=nervous] Hope you weren't Too, Bummed out [img=recommend]

Imagine some one decides to write a fan-iction of this story, That could be very cool, interesting too. I'm just a reader but I appreceate these kind of reviews .

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Yeah I've aldo read some stories whrre characters just are forgotten about. Like that ... it feels like different stories then

The gender-flips during conversations are most likely because of translation from Chinese. That is, IF this was translated.Similar to repeating content that was already written, probsbly translation problems. IDK honestly.

wtf id this saying. And mentioning two cities that dont exist snymore. Its looding memory and talking nonsense. Out

Hypocrasy in your writing? Wasnt these beastmen stuck wayyy before the feudal era ..? I mean "Badbaric animals" Is how you described them in earlier chapters HAHA and now we find they have kings and queens and castles pffftt

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You just wrote a whole Persuading article with this half of the chapter haha //>// . Just intro words after intoro words. Likewaise/ therefore/ similarly/ this is why/ anyways/ thats why - haha pffftt like just write a STORY not an article //.//

5 paragraphs of analysis on this subject in a row ! LOL.