Just_Rakin

A very interesting premise for a system, looking forward on how the author will build the MC and develop his character. Don't want to put in any spoiler but I do hope to see how his current mindset will affect the way he act thru the story .

Hahahaha I laugh when the demon said you have everything and he was like where's the hamburger , love the story so far and the writing is wonderful highly recommend people to read . Please continue writing more

Just shamelessly leaving a review for myself.I am new to writing and I really wanted to write an action story mix with horror and a slice of life style , hoping the story come out well. Do leave a review or a comment whether is good or bad as I will use it to improve ,y writing and edit the story when it needs necessary changes

the story is really interesting and I was hook , questioning how the world will be build .I am really looking forward to more arcs to come. I would like to suggest making the intro to the chapter pace better I was abit confuse but I am glad I continue reading .

A good first start was abit confuse with where the story was going but it brings you back on the topic as you read on