Theothecolossal
A kid that wanna make this a career!
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Theothecolossal16 days ago發表Not my cup of tea but it's a good story, the elements were described nicely, and the action is very nice. premise, world were samurai look for power, taming yokai within blades and treating them as their slaves, in hopes to be powerful enough to be Japan's first emperor. If you're looking for a samurai story this is the one, though i can't judge the full thing since its only three chapters, Keep it up author
- Theothecolossal18 days ago發表
another system that's worth reading in a sea of slop (pun intended) looking forward to the next chapters!
- Theothecolossal3 months ago發表
This gives massive jobless reincarnation vibes, the pacing is well handled and doesnt give you a massive time skip right off the bat but follows the actual second chance of a bastard who got reincarnated into the same world. Honing his skills from a young age to get the advantage! I really love where the author is going with this and I hope to see more in the future, first gene system now this? Nocturn sure doesn't miss does he.
- Theothecolossal4 months ago發表
I'd say this is a really good novel so far, the sentence structure is good and the character interactions are authentic and not wooden, I love the dialogue between them its really fun to read! The story doesn't shy from standing out as well, being different yet still standing as a webnovel esc story! You should def read this novel while it's still free! Good job author
- Theothecolossal4 months ago發表
The MC is definitely a struggle type, no plot armor is detected here! He's not too overpowered but not weak either, the story has a great pace and some action-packed yet sometimes calming and slow descriptions, its the perfect blend! Every time i put this book down I wonder what happens next! It's always on the go and i love it, keep going author!
- Theothecolossal4 months ago回復 MBS_41
ah no he wasnt a neet all they days of his life 😓 a little detail for later
- Theothecolossal5 months ago發表
A good book with a good premise and story ^^ I can't wait to see what the author cooks up from here on out! if you like stories like this one I def recommend
- Theothecolossal5 months ago發表
Wow, an apocalyptic tale to write home about, I feel like we all wanted to be that oc we made in that one mmorpg from months or maybe even days ago and Finn is living that dream. I only read a bit myself but this book has intrigued me so far, Finn the hero of this story is a prodigy, he adapts fast but isn't plain or boring, he doesn't know everything and he's working hard.
- Theothecolossal5 months ago發表
Its a unique Idea a far stray from the typical systems out there its an underrated novel considering it's update stability and the amount of chapters left to us, keep it up author you'll hit big
- Theothecolossal5 months ago發表
A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author
