Bored_Crow

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i have waited for a crocodile fic for far too long wish you good luck author. Anyone who wants to try this this dont worry this doesn't have any inherent cringe its probably better than the flaming pile of sh*t that is most of the other stuff on this platform think of this as a diamond in the rough.

I dont think he is a shichibukai

The story makes sense and works well but the only thing that bothers me is issei's inclusion in the story but that might change so wish you luck.

This is written realistically i feel a story here and nothing else the character interactions are gold basically what i would imagine the actual breaking bad to go down. The fact that the Mc still faces reality and takes in the fact he probably doesn't have plot armor is amazing since most main characters are just build up power always this one is like no system just guts and brain and some charisma. I hope you can have a stable release time and wish you good luck on your journey as a writer.

my eyes have seen worse pathetic

This is beautiful all the words that i can say but the mc does remind me of rudeus a tiny amount but i guess i can mind that since character development exists. For now he is still a child in the story so far and he behaves like one too. The story development is a tad bit slow, and the world background is developed fantastically the updates are quite stable too

Thanks for the chapter interesting you're introducing shanks this early on but i guess the mc is quite broken already.

I understood nothing but otherwise ok don't take that in a bad way