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Good...not as good as the previous one but good. Already the protagonist isn't brainless. Neither are the characters though Natsuha was too contrast of a woman than the one here. Translation is decent; not better than that one as it felt you didn't put efforts in it as you did with that one, but I can understand. That one only had a few chaps while this one had too many so, the original work didn't need to be that much. But I do hope that you don't include these unnecessary descriptions each time a woman appears, already not for the one that had been introduced once. Other than that it's good... Keep updating.

More like Enkidu didn't have a gender at the start, just like in the original, but her looks were slightly more feminine...as the story progressed and he learned more about feelings..he became more of a girl..well at the end of the arc when she confirmed her feelings for Luo Wei it would be she..

Synopsis

It'sHeaven's Wedge or Wedge of Heaven: GilgameshHeaven's Lock: Enkidu andHeaven's Key: Luo Wei...anything other than these should be a translation error..

Just a paragraph from the poem "Epic of Gilgamesh"Didn't find, couldn't correct..

It's not a trap..And I think it's more like the protagonist doesn't know his true gender rather than him having one.Although I can't remember much, but as far as I can, he was bending towards she, and so the whole confusion.

Not the action..the intent.Like the mocking intent behind the action, she already felt that..

I don't have much time for now..maybe after 15 chapters...