DaoistHolySwitch

Amazing stories but u have to work on your synopsis and give a better story development, Setting is good but a lot are required to be done as you continue writing. Wish you well Young Ms expect to see more from you as we continue reading and pinpointing where you need improvement.

Thank you so much I would put that into consideration

Check this out guys and give a feedback

just try to give ya comment on this after reading

Keep your good works. The writing is impressive but you need a lot of improvement in some areas, hope to see that soon and all the best bri

"He was still able to retain his cultivation base, despite not cultivating". We get to know about that in our next chapters

I will try to improve and deliver the best. thanks

thanks bri

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