Labraduble

Your ham-fisted attempt to manufacture tragedy reeks of amateurish storytelling and a fundamental misunderstanding of character development. The protagonist's inexplicable delay in utilizing the rejuvenation potion until after the demise of their loved ones is not only illogical but also serves as a blatant contrivance to elicit cheap emotional responses from the audience. This hackneyed approach to creating pathos undermines the very essence of the reincarnation premise, inherently suggests a level of maturity and wisdom in the main character. Furthermore, the contrived timing of the protagonist's arrival, conveniently timed to preclude any meaningful response or action, is nothing short of narrative malpractice. This lazy plot device insults the intelligence of the reader and betrays a lack of creativity on the part of the author. In essence, this forced tragedy not only fails to enhance the story but actively detracts from it, reducing what could have been a nuanced exploration of growth and relationships to a maudlin exercise in emotional manipulation. It's a disservice to both the character and the audience, squandering the potential of the reincarnation premise in favor of trite melodrama.

How tall is atticus?

Waste my coins*

Personally i fond this whole arc childish and nausating like come one just Get it over with in one chapter dont want to esset nu coins on this

Could you cut out the plot of gangsters going after mcs gf like first time was enough. And it makes no fucking sense what does this have to do the story, is the mc going to establish a PMC if not just cut it out because its gettig annoying to read.

I find it irritating that you always place the protagoist in situations where there are extinuating factors which he has no way of dealing with. It may appear that atticus should have known this but the only reason he exposes himeself to this was to kill all the others, but they somehow always get saved. LIke come one be consistent.

why didnt seraphim kill those in the obsidian order???

Im fucking getting irretated you say the raveinsteins are the strongest but then why are they so fucking volnerable. Ffs everything feels so forced

Please kill of luminous, no way he hets off unscratched and Alive after all that

he better have broken through paragon