Silent_Killer_6981

a pretty good novel but needs further development in the storyline and character development, other than that the rest is good..................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

pretty good manipulative and cunning my favorite MC i like it

Hmmm not bad, some writers prefer to just start and then (POV three hours later they're lying around like drunks or something) at least you gave some information not bad dude

Hm well, not bad chapter dude

yes that's how women are they are stiff like soft steel like noodles, sometimes they try to look calm, evil, don't care about you and it turns out they secretly like you, pay attention to you and yeah that's why they are weird, if you care too much they don't appreciate it, if you don't care they are anxious, hesitant, indifferent, don't care or even yeah in some cases will do extreme things, my little advice "Tame" them because tigers will always be there unless they die, and if you tame them well they won't go away yeah they go away if they get "refined sugar" you must know because there are many users (if your woman is cheating try to find out if she did it on purpose or was forced if she did it on purpose torture her and don't kill her make her regret being born or chop her up and make Yahoo for street animals and her cheating if she was forced then torture her cheating, yeah hopefully the next story is as interesting as this dude, a little advice your MC is quite good manipulative, quite open-minded, not stiff, knows enough romance (it seems you are quite experienced), bastard (I like that) add a little bit of character from the Re game because there are many beautiful flowers in game Re, rebecca, ada, Clare, Jil, dimitri and his three daughters, miranda and many more because Re 0 ~ now there are many flowers and if possible take one dead flower that is on the big ship in the ocean before she becomes a zombie because the flower is quite beautiful but the developer made her become a zombie because as you said "children make choices adults take everything"

Hehehe, not bad chapter dude

Quité good chapter dude

hahaha MC is a rattlesnake i like that, next dude

Hahahahaha MC is a rattlesnake i like that