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Wimpy bich, everytging the coment says is right its like you copy pasted the cannon plot with your wimpy OC as sung jinwoo as now ypu are saying that is not the case comee the f on bro do you even read what you write?And yeah chapters are short AF..Waste of time dont ead this and author if you are reading this just stop writing if you dont know what to write if you have put the mind you have put on writing synopis on the actual chapters it would have been better anyway goodluck..
first thing i will say about the OC is EWWWW EWWW EWWWThe OC doesnot need Argona to erase or manipulate his mind for him to control the protagonist's low self esteem low self confidence is already controling whole plot he is like middle age brain child ewwwww he crys for awekning in a clearing of a forest for destroying the forest and says i dont want to do thiss blah blah shit fk. why do you even write this shit if he was going to be a pussy Our Aurthur is the fking best i dont need this pussyyass crybaby cring feat middleage child with edgy name like cownkingor whatever fking waste of time idiot authur idiot OC.🤦♂️
hah, infantile your brain..Now we humans phycopaths, sociopaths, Dictators for human development huh what a great eye opening logic you have said i am enlightened woww. idiots like you who think suffering is good because it helps to progess for greater good are the ones hampering the progess in the first place..
what QI you said Reiki or spritual energy not qi get the words straight..dont be lazy.
yeah i was thinking the same the whole point of coming here was gor the cultivaation talent to upgrad3 for this fool of a mc hqs forgetten abput it i giess..
Novel concept ruined by amature writing and force plots..
waste of chapter..
its funny how the author is milking the chapters with this shet, its impossible for ricky and all the members of the cult to do this like we are talking about AIs with quantum computers the size of a state in US with that the prediction ability of a AI would be i dont know but farrrr better then this shet that you are writing it should and could pridict any of that attacks with how many people were involve..you should really think before you write its not even funny now why you are nerfing the quantum processers like really they are Q U A N T U M compuers..i hope you finish this chibi villian arc that was completelly unnecessary and unasked for and chapters realeases has been what to say irregular right if you cant post 2 chapters a day then dont but make it offical and then ride with it why the unnecessary excuses..anyway thanks for chapter..
its too good for this platform, but i am enjoying it. Thanks for your hatd work and dedication author this by far non of the most thrilling and goosebumping chapters i have ever read in my 4 years of web novel experince and i wish i could jist forget my memory of thos book so that i could enjoy that feeling of reading and emotional high but alas ..you have done a magnificent job and carry on on your endavour best wishes..
Too much info, a girl being beautiful is normal so you dont describe as if she is the only girl beutiful enough to be compared to a goddess or are you telling that no other girls comparable to beauty godess exist in this world, and why a whole chapter describing this girls "beauty" ..