Abel_Black
Hello everyone. My name is Abel Black. I'm a rookie novelist from Bangladesh. I've been writing stories and novels for almost three years. But this is the first time I mustered up the guts to show eve
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Abel_Black2 years ago發表The story is amazing. The writing style is simple yet enjoyable. Really good job
- Abel_Black2 years ago發表
nice story. loved the characters, especially Zina. Good luck
- Abel_Black2 years ago發表
The story is good. The character's are likeable. But my one problem is the name selection. The title 'Maid's secret' is kinda overused and I probably saw similar titles. It is something that make good books getting lost among others. Other than that, not bad.
- Abel_Black2 years ago發表
Loving the story a lot. Loved the pace of the story. I loved the character design the most. It's been a while since I read such a story. Really enjoyed every second of reading it. Hats off
- Abel_Black2 years ago發表
An amazing story, loved the pace. Would love to read ut again in the future. Hats off
- Abel_Black2 years ago發表
Good story. Kinda surprised to see only this much views. The chapters would be be better if expressed more in fewer words. For instance, 700 to 750 words are better. Overall, not bad.
- Abel_Black2 years ago回復 OrbitAround
thanks a lot. the story will only get better and better.
- Abel_Black2 years ago發表
He says 'what' a lot of times XD
該書已被刪除。 - Abel_Black2 years ago發表
Love the story so far. Read upto the 6th chapter. But I would suggest to keep the chapters a little shorter so that the audience can wait and wonder what shall happen next. Other than that, a great story.
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