Darknull

it's more like a wish fulfilment novel than something serious

and you've been giving to many skills for every gesture

you make her seem like some innocent clueless highschool girl, she's a women that's suffered and had been betrayed how can her defences be put down just because of some nice gestures from a man known for being cold,how can she be so trusting of him just because of being kind to her for 2 weeks maybe come on

the cringe in this situation appalling

and is it a fantasy world or a medieval world

you never explained how the charm works or how the system shop works or what the charm looks like and the way he's acting is suspicious,if that was a fantasy world he would have been suspected of being possessed or mind controlled and we don't even know anything about that world no world history nothing,what kingdom is he in, what's the nobles ranking,how the society words,where his estate is,where is territory is,what it looks like nothing,just blank

not as descriptive as I had hoped for this kind of genre and the chapter feels a bit rushed,you skipped their talk,and maybe should have added about the carriage ride to the mansion.

the beginning is a bit shaky, can't really get immersed in it but I'll see where it goes,not continuing reading it though will continue later,I'll keep my ratings low and change it later depends

not there

read up to chapter 179, it's a good read but it honestly gets repetitive and bland,no real sense of danger mostly meeting someone stronger get embarrassed scared oppressed the usual, get's angry swears revenge and a huge evolution, mostly fights are boring too, characters not really that good,main character gets bland,no good rival or strong characters like i don't hate overpowerd MC but iIdo hate it when they get too strong (he's not too strong it's just meh),like bring an enemy that can give a good fight,make MC feel pain,suffer, torture,he doesn't feel like a monster more like a fucked up human that gets system,romance is shit,