SerpentiCat

As in the show's timeline? If so then you're off by 10 years. x784 my friend.

When did Alfonso temporarily lose sight in this life?

The big question is: can Alfonso manipulate motion and structure of metal from a distance or does he need to be in physical contact with it and can only manipulate its structure? Depending on the answer copying Magneto may or may not be possible.

Isn't storm release water and lightning mix though? I can never remember if it's that or a trio with wind. So anyway this might be the reason you thought so. Or maybe some fanfic author combined Kumo's lightning release with Gyuki's water release theme. Actually wasn't it raining/storming during pre Killer B Gyuki's jinchuriki breakout flashback? … Why the hell do I even remember that scene. Brain… I'm disappointed with your priorities.

Yeah, I have to agree that Elicia pushing Alfonso to agree to Laxus' demands is not a good thing and an odd choice from someone who knows what he is going to be like without positive intervention. The only possible explanation I can think of for why she does that would be her being mentally stuck on Laxus post his attempt at take over of the guild. It's not a good reason for her behavior but it would explain things.

I'm not sure what you are uncertain about here.

I already wrote in that comment about Crobat's upright flying position being really not good for carrying people. The size of the Crobat doesn't really have effect on that, you just wouldn't have place to sit on and would be left with clinging onto the Crobat with high likelihood of sliding right off. That's why only harnesses or some weird saddles would be the only reasonable options.

Honestly he should change that name. It can cause confusion too easily. It doesn't even have to be a completely different name. Lilith, Lila, Lilian. Anything really.

I know. This comment is a note for the author in case they wish to correct this mistake.

Not only a tiny chapter, not only barely a twitch along the storyline but also THIS. I thought that the man could have killed his family for some reason but you just had to go for this… I don't even know what to call it. UGH. I'm about halfway to eagerness for my interest in the story to burn out. It probably isn't going to take long with chapters of this size. Should have paid attention to that in the first place. Shame, the story is interesting enough.