harem is bad -me
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new chapter when?
Not bad could use some polishing in some places(i.e storyline explanation and basic background details) ,and is an overall decent read so far. (tip: With my experiences in reading fanfics, assume the reader has little to no knowledge of the world and find ways to introduce them to the plots so that you can plan on how to properly introduce stuff.) (tip/advice: In a multiverse/Omniverse fanfic, a AU is your best friend.)
tftc!
I enjoyed the story quite a bit and found it to be very interesting.
Christopher > silver
it's at 7500 and points can't be allocated to it
why are parts repeating?
tftc!