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He was living like a wishfullfilment Protagonist you know the one who thinks everything is centered around him and everything is story or game and didn't think seriously until reality will slap him in the face.
A no name no background and no achievement wants to be a captain? Who does he think he is? Oh right he is the MC/Protagonist of the story it was always like this.
Not giving explanation is problematic he should just explain some of his abilities but not all because its better than making Mayuri desperate and he might slice him up just to know his abilities.
Its okay to be cautious but if he became paraniod and acted lile a dickless bitch then it bad
Is the MC serious Did he lose his penis or something or the author like ro portray him as pure man without desires?
Did MC lose his desires and libido became stone
10 years without intimacy MC should have already know something was wrong yet he was blind.
No explanation about MC past or background? Who's the boss? Is he in pokemon world? What story did he have in pokemon world? Lolz too many things but no explanation.and MC was fucking creepy and disgusting.
Not compatible in her image