The_Idiotic_Prince

It's a good story would love to see how it unfolds.

It's a good story would love to see how it unfolds.

It's a good story would love to see how it unfolds.

It's a good story would love to see how it unfolds.

It's a good story would love to see how it unfolds.

did you seriously gave a rajput english name!!!!

first of all the writing quality is good and the flow of the story is to my liking. usually i don't like too much paced story as it might lose base so yeah that's a plus too as the time has given for story development. so overall it is a good novel to read.

If you want to go on journey to fantasy world this is the perfect book for that. the first chap is what makes you hooked to the story, it's written wonderfully and the start will drive one crazy by the twists and turns. So try it and you'll love it!!

I will fix the grammar mistakes and will work on the POV,thanks for review

Thanks, i am still new to writing but will make sure that quality gets better!!