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ok_ok_1494a year ago回復 BJ1869co-creater
- ok_ok_14942 years ago發表
its weird half of the time you have no idea what is happening and the other half you are engaged and entertained by this fan fic. Hopefully the author keeps on updating and it gets better.
- ok_ok_14942 years ago發表
Its actually pretty good so far, hopefully you don't drop this author! Through I also wish that you could use something like Grammarly or even chat gpt to fish the grammatical issues.
該書已被刪除。 - ok_ok_14942 years ago回復 PettiaMius_6689
...then its not the gamers mind...
- ok_ok_14942 years ago發表
i wanted to bash my head in because of all the grammatical and other mistakes in here...
該書已被刪除。 - ok_ok_14942 years ago發表
wt heck, is Infront of every sentence.
- ok_ok_14942 years ago回復 EZRAEL_Dawn
the author is not smart enough to have thought of that.
- ok_ok_14942 years ago發表
where tfdid he get a cigarette from?