nether550dev
Heyooo , I am an author currently working on THE REALM BEYOND THE VEIL it's one of my most focused works and I hope it grabs your fancy, go on and check it out.
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nether550dev2 years ago發表The story is interesting and draws one in, although the chapters are quite short, it is not to bad. The grammar can be sorted out but overall it is understandable. Good job.
- nether550dev2 years ago回復 Lawrence_Oshim
Thank you very much, I'm happy that you like it so far, you have my gratitude. There are plenty more things added every chapter and it gets more interesting the further you read.[img=recommend]
- nether550dev2 years ago發表
That is the question, now isn't it... It's more for clearance sake, wrote it on a whim.
- nether550dev2 years ago回復 146whitewolf
Thank you. Happy to know that you like it, much appreciated, do enjoy the next chapters as well. :D
- nether550dev2 years ago回復 146whitewolf
Haha, Yep, he sure did. :D
- nether550dev2 years ago回復 146whitewolf
Hey there, there's more about the scroll in further chapters, hope you enjoy it. :D
- nether550dev2 years ago回復 Aaron_ThunderSteel
Thanks for letting me know, I'll add more detail in the early chapters. There's a lot more in later chapters so I hope you enjoy them[img=recommend]
- nether550dev2 years ago發表
Great book, It's something new for me, I'm not really used to these kinds of books, but definitely worth reading it. Good job![img=recommend]
- nether550dev2 years ago發表
remove 'hand' before 'right-hand' accidentally put and extra one.
- nether550dev2 years ago發表
The book is interesting, and there's a lot of potential, there are some grammar mistakes but that can always be ironed out with chapter editing. Other than that, it's pretty good not gonna lie. Good Job![img=recommend]
