Azure_grassland

The blind man is the mc by the way.And can you please remove the T word in your comment? I don't think that will encourage viewers to read

Thanks man

I read this cause you commented on my novel. There were some grammatical errors and weird character design but man you wrote gold. I wonder how people get such amazing story's ideas🤔

This was never peer reviewed so i am open for suggestions. Help me write a better symposis, ok?

Just a shameless author giving himself a 5 star review. you have seen plentiful of such reviews right? So don't mind me give me thou power stones!

As mentioned in novel his emotions died with his parents. He matured really quickly to survive as an orphan. This character was also neccesary for the upcoming story

But no he doesn't, have a sick sister or brother or any other family member

Yup you guessed it

I can give more suggestions if you want

Mr. Author, I a fellow author read your book's first chapter and quite liked the idea of the gods destroy universe. I won't say much as this is your book and your story but here are some suggestions -this novel's back story is too common in other words the whole idea of God grant wish after death is used too many time so you can think of something else -as per written the hero is granted talent in everything by God. You can make the mc forget ever meeting the god or let him remember that he met the god but don't remember what they talked about. -you can set the story in a apocalyptic world so as to create tension. It is your wish whether you want to follow my words or not but keep writing. Maybe one day you might be a great author