Knight_Noctis

The story is good. Though if he learnt shiki two sword style he's gonna need another sword. It can be enma or sandai kitetsu or even shusui. Moria shouldn't be challenge for our mc

no need to transfer haki to your family. If possible, replace haki with the ability to use nature chakra easily. Nature chakra us op in naruto world

it's really unnecessary to get so many powers honestly. He'll never have enough time for it. I feel like he should only take selective amount of power but even that is unnecessary. This story would've been way better if it was only ulquiorra's power plus whatever template he gets

Honestly, it's an outstanding story . The progression of the mc to become the pillar is incredibly well-written. From design to character interaction to story development, everything is remarkable. As the author said, though, demon slayer stories are most of the time precursor to multiversal stories. However,most aren't really well executed. But if the author wants to make this story multiversal , I'll have faith in him to write a good one . Just make sure he just sticks to swordsmanship.All will be fine.

him ignoring vivi with the excuse of feeling sleepy feels a little bit excessive. Anos is a warrior , and sleep is secondary for people like him, Where trouble can be just around the corner

he's not zoro , originally, right ? So he shouldn't be that oblivious. Even the original zoro isn't that oblivious after all.

or it might also indicate that you're trying to hide something . Doesn't feel like Mc Is trying to do anything effective, though I don't blame him . The plot of the story made mc start way early

Good story overall . The premise and plot are well-written. I liked the story of the mc's past and character development very much. Though I have to say , in the beginning, I wasn't a fan of the direction of the story. Even if it's a bit cliche , I felt like the guy should've gone to shimoutsuki Dojo to reach the final level of swordsmanship. Also, I feel like it's a bit risky to make your protagonist someone with family as it can easily be used for hostage situations. Overall, though nice and unique story author.

is this a translation? I genuinely hope I don't have to see cultivation shit here as well

It feels like it already should've messed up a major timeline . Connecting the mc with his long-lost mother is already a major deviation . With the amount of change the guy is doing, the butterfly effect should smash him like a freight train