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Lack of reading comprehension. Anyway, I'm not here to nag. Sorry for being so temperamental. It's your story, I liked it at first, then I was disappointed by its development and now I don't care. Good luck 🍀🤞, may you succeed.

Do what you want, it's your story, but you're being obtuse in this regard: 1- Who would question that so and so is using magic, if in westeros magic is nothing but mythology except in the North, beyond the Wall and Essos? On top of that, there is no evidence to prove that the protagonist uses magic, there goes that nerf excuse (the most one could argue here is foul play, but in the end there would be no tangible proof of anything). 2- I see you greatly underestimate the magic of a Skinchanger even a novice one: as long as there is an animal in play, be the horse the case in this matter, then no normal person would be a match for him, it's simple logic, his control over his mount is superhuman, almost perfect. He may fail in the jousting technique, but we both know that the protagonist is not bad at it, the opposite would be an excuse, he may not be the best by far in that technique, however, this is compensated by his magic, it is simple 1+1 (the second 1 being an inhuman ability). There is no comparison between what a warg can do and what a normal person can do. You have to put the power levels in order otherwise there is no way to understand it.

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Well, the only moot point would be to crossover with this universe. It would simply destroy the cult completely. The whole rhythm of the cult building would go out the window. The story would lose its depth: it would become a digression in itself: a let's see how I put this together with that. It's not worth the effort in my opinion. It won't turn out well: building the foundations is very important since time immemorial. As for the protagonist having another partner: wouldn't that be too cumbersome? It would add drama to the plot, yes, no doubt, but little else. Although the latter is not too important, really. Not when the future of the cult takes a dark turn with no apparent return. There will be mass desertion here, for sure. Please keep tradition above experimentation, master.

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